The Legend of the Fallen Bow

This is a legend I wrote for the realm in which my book takes place. The idea popped into my head, and after playing with some archaic grammar in my head, I decided to sit down and write it.
My intention was to write it as though it were a spoken tale.
Tell me what you think!
EDIT: I've madde quite a few edits to the text of the story that I believe greatly improve it's feel and flow. I also changed the title.
If you see any typos that I missed, or anything else thatcould be improved, please let me know.
Thanks for reading!

This story, and all realms and aspects mentioned therin, is (c) me.
Please do not use without my permission.